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Friday 6 July 2012

Treatment - Short Story - unfinished.

I dont think this is exactly what i want to do but i thought of having maybe about a male that's well known as a thug in the streets but behind closed doors he gets physically abused by his wife. He self harms and lies and says that he got into a fight with other men. 

His wife and him have a strange relationship where at one minute it's loving and caring but if he makes one little mistake she starts to throw things at him then beat him.

With the editing i want to show flashbacks of her as a child being abused by her father. i want her to wear a necklace that symbolises that shes the same person when she grows up so the audience know.

i want the present scenes to be in a rich luxurious living room where theyre sitting on the sofa.

1 comment:

  1. www a realy unusual story with lots of potential for development. I am looking forward to reading more...

    ebi no evidence of any development on the blog for over 2 months - this needs to be recitified very quickly

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